Roses II

Had to make a second one. The previous 1 din satisfy me, as something was missing..

neway, i managed to make a new 1, all thx to thur!

thx!!!

Should I compare her to thousands of roses?

As her scent is unique to her and her only,

And her smile blooms, mesmerizing me,

For her petals are soft,

Only to be touched and felt by the fortunate one,

Although at a time her thorns cut my heart,

Pierced deep, deeper than any soul should,

At a moment knowing she could never be mine,

For my eyes were shut blinded,

Losing sense of reality,

But i shall bear these scars,

Forever wishing we would unite, embracing one another, 

Knowing, it is a symbol of my undying love for her.

n_n

Roses I

Wooo!! my 2nd post.. i have no idea why all of a sudden i have interest in poetry. mayB its because thur keep reciting his poem and it got stuck in my head.. guez its a good thing (i have my reasons, hehe n_n ) so i tried making one, with some help from Qib of coz. thx dude.

for me, poetry expresses one's inner feeling and ideas which in one's mind.. it describe the beauty and the passion that the person has towards the lover..

and i am not excluded...

Should she be compared to thousands of roses?

For her thorns cut my heart,

Pierced deep, deeper than any soul should,

But i shall bear these scars,

For i know, they are a symbol of our eternal love.

Although she was compared to thousands of roses,

she was greater than those.

And although she sometimes cut my heart,

i may still forgive her.

As it pierced deep into my soul, 

so will my love for her.

Bearing and knowing, that the scars are the signature of our love,

lasting until the end of time.

Clueless

ermm.. so this is blogging, huh? im lost..
some1 plz tell me wat to blog about..